定目标:一集拿走 64 个地道职场表达
绩效评估前夜,表格里「本年度目标」一栏还是空白——定目标难的不是写,是写一个年底真能衡量、又不会被自己废掉的目标。这一集从绩效评估(performance reviews or appraisals)讲起:谈成就怎么用数字和证据 back up,谈弱点怎么换成「我经验不足」的体面说法,最后用 SMART 五维度(specific、measurable、achievable、relevant、time-based)把目标钉死。64 个关键表达全部来自对话原文,按「从评估到定标」分好组;目标不是许愿,是可以验收的承诺。
精选深讲
1. performance reviews or appraisals · 绩效评估 —— 本集题眼。Pippa 的语境:“most organisations have performance reviews or appraisals and this is where they’ll expect you to set goals”(大多数组织都有绩效评估,他们会期望你在那时设定目标)。两个词同义:performance review 偏「复盘表现」,appraisal 偏「评定等级」,很多公司混用。它是本集全部话术的舞台——谈成就、谈弱点、定目标,都发生在评估面谈里。
2. go above and beyond · 超越本职 —— Pippa 的表述:“where you maybe go above and beyond, you do more than other people”(你也许超越了本职——做得比别人多)。EP04 老朋友回归:绩效评估里它是「超出预期」的标准说法,自带参照系(beyond=越过那条「本职」线)。固定结构 go above and beyond 三词一个不能少;比 work hard 更有说服力。评估、简历、面试全通用。
3. SMART targets · SMART 目标 —— Phil 的定义:“it’s an acronym. Each of the letters stands for a particular word”——“specific, measurable, achievable, relevant and time-based”(具体、可衡量、可实现、相关、有时限),并且 “these are supposed to be the things that will make a target more effective”(这些维度能让目标更有效)。Pippa 的反例极有说服力:没有这些维度的目标,“don’t have a real way of knowing whether we have achieved them”(年底没法知道达没达成)。
4. address this issue · 解决这个问题 —— Pippa 的坦诚句:“I know I need to address this issue”——她注解:“address just means fix”,并点出妙处:“saying this yourself before your manager says it… shows that you recognise the things that you’re not as good at”(自己先说,表明你认识到自己不擅长的方面)。address 比 fix 正式——「着手处理」;绩效评估、客户投诉、邮件全通用。语法:直接接宾语,别加 to。
5. build on that · 在此基础上继续 —— Phil 的定目标起手式:“start by looking at what’s gone well and then think, how can you build on that?”(先看哪些做得好,再想怎么在此基础上继续)——接 “take the skills and knowledge that you’ve developed and make things even better”。EP21 的 build on our previous successes 在这里变成通用方法论:目标不必凭空另起炉灶,从优势延伸最稳。介词 on 固定;与 build up(积累)方向不同。
一、开场:目标与心态
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|---|---|
| goals for your career | 职业目标 | “Do you have goals for your career?” |
| a sense of optimism | 乐观精神 | “good to have a sense of optimism” |
| realistic | 切合实际 | “make sure your goals are realistic” |
| disheartening | 令人挫败的 | “it can be disheartening if you don’t achieve” |
| progress in your career | 职业进阶 | “help you progress in your career” |
| your podcast guide to the world of work | 职场世界播客指南 | “your podcast guide to the world of work” |
二、目标为什么重要
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|---|---|
| goals are important at work | 目标在工作中重要 | “Do you think goals are important at work?” |
| career or job goals | 职业或工作目标 | “today we’re talking about career or job goals” |
| motivate yourself | 激励自己 | “you can motivate yourself” |
| improve your performance | 提升表现 | “to improve your performance” |
| something to aim for | 可以瞄准的东西 | “good to have something to aim for” |
| quite repetitive | 挺重复的 | “your job is quite repetitive” |
| performance reviews or appraisals | 绩效评估(本集题眼) | “most organisations have performance reviews or appraisals” |
| set goals for yourself | 为自己设定目标 | “expect you to set goals for yourself” |
| that formal performance review process | 正式的绩效评估流程 | “talk about that formal performance review process” |
三、绩效评估与目标设定
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|---|---|
| your achievements | 你的成就 | “talk about your achievements” |
| going well at work | 工作里进展顺利 | “what’s been going well at work” |
| made real progress in… | 取得了实实在在的进步 | “I’ve made real progress in…” |
| How would you do this, Phil? | 你会怎么做? | “How would you do this, Phil?” |
| particularly good at | 特别擅长 | “you think you’re particularly good at” |
| go above and beyond | 超越本职(本集题眼) | “where you maybe go above and beyond” |
| excel at | 特别擅长 | “one thing I think I excel at is…” |
| particularly proud of | 特别自豪 | “I am particularly proud of this” |
| list evidence | 列出证据 | “you might need to list evidence” |
| a certain figure | 某个数字 | “in a certain figure, or maybe a project” |
| the 20% increase | 20% 的增长 | “I’m particularly proud of the 20% increase” |
| back up | 支撑、佐证 | “use as evidence to back up the fact” |
| what you could improve | 可以改进的地方 | “expected to talk about what you could improve” |
四、谈成就:进步、擅长与证据
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|---|---|
| weaknesses | 弱点 | “difficult to talk about our weaknesses” |
| stressful performance review | 压力山大的绩效评估 | “in that stressful performance review” |
| a slightly different way | 换一个角度 | “think about this in a slightly different way” |
| through no fault of your own | 不是你的错 | “through no fault of your own” |
| I’m not spending much time working on… | 我在……上花的时间不多 | “I’m not spending much time working on…” |
| more experience with that | 多积累经验 | “I’d love to have more experience with that” |
| how your manager can help you | 经理能怎么帮你 | “how your manager can help you as well” |
| support and training | 支持和培训 | “with the right support and training” |
| I’m finding sales really stressful | 销售压力很大 | “I’m finding sales really stressful” |
| some more training | 多一些培训 | “some more training so that I feel really confident” |
| feel really confident | 很有信心 | “so that I feel really confident” |
| address this issue | 解决这个问题(本集题眼) | “I know I need to address this issue” |
| recognise | 认识到 | “shows that you recognise the things” |
| set some goals for the next year | 为下一年设定目标 | “set some goals for the next year” |
| address just means fix | address 就是 fix | “address just means fix” |
五、谈弱点:换一个角度
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|---|---|
| talk about goals at work | 谈工作目标 | “talk about goals at work, Phil?” |
| what’s gone well | 做得好的 | “looking at what’s gone well” |
| build on that | 在此基础上继续 | “how can you build on that?” |
| skills and knowledge | 技能和知识 | “the skills and knowledge that you’ve developed” |
| it might be training | 可能是培训 | “it might be training” |
| support from your line manager | 来自直属经理的支持 | “support from your line manager” |
| the things that you find difficult | 你觉得困难的事 | “spend more time on the things that you find difficult” |
六、请经理帮忙与坦诚
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|---|---|
| SMART targets | SMART 目标(本集题眼) | “talked about is SMART targets” |
| an acronym | 首字母缩略词 | “it’s an acronym” |
| specific, measurable, achievable, relevant and time-based | 具体、可衡量、可实现、相关、有时限 | “which are specific, measurable, achievable, relevant and time-based” |
| more effective | 更有效 | “make a target more effective” |
| unrealistic goals | 不切实际的目标 | “we might make unrealistic goals” |
| a real way of knowing | 真正知道的办法 | “a real way of knowing whether we have achieved them” |
| actually measure | 真正衡量 | “a goal that you can actually measure” |
| followed it through from the beginning to the end | 从头跟到尾 | “followed it through from the beginning to the end” |
| a 10% increase on sales | 销售额增长 10% | “making a 10% increase on sales” |
| at the end of the year | 今年年底 | “at the end of the year, have I done it or not?” |
| sounds very SMART | 听起来非常 SMART | “that sounds very SMART” |
| That’s it for this episode | 本期就到这里 | “That’s it for this episode of Office English” |
| keeping everyone happy at work | 让职场每个人都满意 | “keeping everyone happy at work” |
| See you then. | 到时见。 | “See you then.” |
七、定目标:build on 与改进
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
|---|
八、SMART 目标与示范
| 词条 | 中文释义 | 原文例句 |
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扩展表达(未入选核心清单,但同样值得收)
| 词条 | 中文释义 |
|---|---|
| push you forward | 推动你前进 |
| achievements | 成就 |
| think really big | 想得很大 |
| for the year ahead | 为接下来的一年 |
| general conversations | 一般对话 |
| targets are often about improvement | 目标往往关乎进步 |
| a particular sport or activity | 某项运动或活动 |
| a project that you’ve completed | 你完成的项目 |
| a real way of knowing | 真正知道的办法 |
| keeping everyone happy at work | 让职场每个人都满意 |
串词成段
64 个词放回一场真实的绩效评估,是这样的:
Appraisal season. The form asks two questions. First, your wins: “this year I’ve made real progress in reporting” — and back it up: “the 20% increase in dashboards delivered.” Or lead with strength: “one thing I think I excel at is untangling messy data,” where you go above and beyond. Then the harder box: weaknesses. Don’t say “I’m really bad at my job” — reframe it: “I’m not spending much time working on sales through no fault of my own, and I’d love to have more experience.” Offer the fix yourself: “I know I need to address this issue” — before your manager says it. Now set the goal: start from what’s gone well and build on that — take the skills and knowledge you’ve developed and make things even better. Want it to sound very SMART? Make it specific, measurable, achievable, relevant and time-based: “by the end of the year, I will have followed a new project through from the beginning to the end, making a 10% increase on sales.” At next year’s review, the answer to “have I done it or not?” is written — measurably — in the form.
参考译文:评估季来了。表格问两个问题。第一,你的成绩:「今年我在报表方面取得了实实在在的进步」——并佐证:「交付的看板数量增长了 20%。」或者从强项说起:「我觉得我特别擅长的一件事,是理清乱糟糟的数据」——那个你超越本职的领域。然后是更难的格子:弱点。别说「我这份工作做得很糟」——换个说法:「这不是我的错,但我在销售上花的时间不多,我很想多积累一些经验。」自己把修正方案端出来:「我知道我需要解决这个问题」——赶在经理开口之前。现在定目标:从做得好的出发,在此基础上继续——把你已经发展的技能和知识拿出来,让事情更好。想让它「听起来非常 SMART」?让它具体、可衡量、可实现、相关、有时限:「到今年年底,我将负责一个新项目并从头跟到尾,使销售额增长 10%。」明年评估时,「做没做到」的答案已经被可衡量地写在了表格里。
一句话带走
定目标的顺序:先 made real progress in(用证据谈成就),再体面地说弱点(不是 fault,是缺经验),最后 SMART 五问锁死——specific 到 time-based 各打一勾,目标就从愿望变成了承诺。